Friday, February 22, 2013

Excalibur Rise



Hear our troubled cries
Excalibur rise
Tonight
Great Merlin the wise
is pleased to advise
the fight
Against enemy lies
infiltrating spies

To join our allies
We take to the skies
last light
A hero's reprise
no time for goodbyes
good knight
Excalibur rise
Hear our troubled cries

5 comments:

  1. A brilliant story on the majestic sword !!!

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  2. Your take on folk-tales is breathtaking. This one is exquisite.

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  3. Excellent, hope rises to defeat evil, great lines

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  4. Love this call to arms. Wish for this magical realm in the real world sometimes to fight evil. we all need a hero.

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  5. You mastered the rhyme scheme here.

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