Thursday, February 28, 2013

Haiku: Risshun (coming of Spring)

March in like a lamb
So goes the coming of Spring
Out like a lion


In like a lion
So goes the coming of Spring
March out like a lamb 


Carpe Diem #133, Risshun (coming of Spring)


11 comments:

  1. Loved it! A little twist in your sequence!

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  2. Where I live this is almost always the true weather report for March!!

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  3. that was a different manner of depiction . loved it nonetheless ! unique :)

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  4. Oh, the weather is so unpredictable!

    Old Willow Woman

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  5. Awesome ... the circle of life caught in a few words.

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  6. Anonymous3/01/2013

    Beautifully woven! I liked the technique of inversion
    Cheers!
    Gracy
    http://www.gracydsouza.com/2013/03/01/winter-bids-bye-haiku/

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  7. Loved the word play, very different!

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  8. What a wonderful way to describe winter and spring ... well done !!!

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  9. Anonymous3/01/2013

    Don't they some say that one day the lion shall lie down with the lamb?
    Perhaps when their marching is done.
    Thank you for sharing with us :)

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