Tuesday, March 5, 2013

Carpe Diem Special #25, Onitsura's Spring Haze

Spring bluebells
Carpet the forest
Mystic haze
Carpe Diem Special #25, Onitsura's Spring Haze

 tokitaru kane no ayumi ya haru kasumi

the bell from far away -
how it moves along in its coming
through the Spring haze

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8 comments:

  1. WabiSabi3/05/2013

    I feel like I am in a mystic haze at the moment... some spring might snap me out of it....maybe!

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  2. Magical Mystical Teacher3/06/2013

    Yes, yes, yes! I love bluebells, although I haven't seen any since I sold my farm in Pennsylvania nearly 20 years ago. Thank you!

    Holybell

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  3. Unknown3/06/2013

    beautiful! loved the haiku reading!

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  4. Mark3/06/2013

    What would happen if you wrote it this way:

    spring bluebells
    ringing in the forest
    mystic haze

    Thanks for the inspiration!

    Bellsong

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    1. Unknown3/06/2013

      I like either way. Thanks for sharing :)

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  5. Chèvrefeuille3/06/2013

    Beautifully crafted haiku Jenn

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  6. Maggie Grace3/06/2013

    Beautiful words and image!

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  7. brudberg3/06/2013

    Lovely read :-)

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